Good points and considerations. Good the emphasis you put in defending your ideas. You sound persuasive. Mind you, though. Try to avoid generalizations, unless you can provide data to substantiate your statement . When you claim that in Italy, unlike other countries, people do not read and you are worried about this, this is a bit "invalid" becuase you do not provide data to support it. Then, remember the "s" in the third person singular. All in all, good, but you can improve if you want to.